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RE: Antes de nacer



Dear Free Writer,

We are very happy that you have joined #wewrite and we hope that you have fun writing together. What you write is a learning experience for all of us and feedback is important. Also, read your comments, they can be very useful. Below you will find the review of your publication.
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Misunderstanding
Title - 2 point2
Hashtags - 1 points1
A flashy start - 2 points2
Creativity / out-of-the-box thinking - 3 points3
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Verification date:September 13, 2024

Well done you only forgot to describe what you see and feel. Congratulations you finished Lesson 1. A good weekend to you

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All good? - You could be nominated for the 5 best of the week.

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Thank you for your verification. At no time did I forget to express what I see and what I feel. I included it in the first paragraph. “I see my beautiful mother and feel an intense emotion”

Maybe I should have placed it out of context but the limitation of 100 words conditioned me.

Even so, I felt good participating in this learning proposal. Thank you for making it possible.

As a more experienced writer you are a few steps ahead which isn't wrong and I did see what you mentioned so don't worry. It's just a bit different from what is asked and if separated from the rest of the text it makes our mind open to see different ways of writing.

It can be a puzzle to use the 100 words, I know al about it and it's not that who writes 100 words is per se a lazy writer like someone once told me.

It's good to hear you saw your beautiful mom while you wrote. For sure she is a source of inspiration and helpful if it comes to your niche.

A warm hug to you and thank you for your kind words. I wish you a great weekend before we Lesson 2 starts (for sure you will like that).