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RE: Antes de nacer
Thank you for your verification. At no time did I forget to express what I see and what I feel. I included it in the first paragraph. “I see my beautiful mother and feel an intense emotion”
Maybe I should have placed it out of context but the limitation of 100 words conditioned me.
Even so, I felt good participating in this learning proposal. Thank you for making it possible.
As a more experienced writer you are a few steps ahead which isn't wrong and I did see what you mentioned so don't worry. It's just a bit different from what is asked and if separated from the rest of the text it makes our mind open to see different ways of writing.
It can be a puzzle to use the 100 words, I know al about it and it's not that who writes 100 words is per se a lazy writer like someone once told me.
It's good to hear you saw your beautiful mom while you wrote. For sure she is a source of inspiration and helpful if it comes to your niche.
A warm hug to you and thank you for your kind words. I wish you a great weekend before we Lesson 2 starts (for sure you will like that).