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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago

Here is my summary:

Adanma and Mama prepare to walk up the mountain first thing in the morning.
Queen decided to stay behind. Her way of not condoning what Adanma is doing.
The morning arrives. Mama is cautiously optimistic about how this small journey is going to affect Adanma.
When the sun’s rays hit the mountains peak, illuminating the summit, they start their ascent.
A trail runs from the mountains base, to the the summit, making it easy to hike in a couple of hours.
Mama feels like Adanma is too optimistic during their walk. Adanma tells mama that she is sure that God will show her what to do.
In the distance, they hear footsteps growing nearer. Was Queen following them?
As they approach the summit, Adanma asks mama to leave her alone so that she can pray. Mama reluctantly leaves her be.
As Adanma kneels down to pray, she catches the glimmer of a metal object lying in the dirt. It’s a knife. Adanma knows what to do. She shrieks as she thrusts the knive deep into her stomach. At that same moment, a man emerges- “Adanma Nooooooo!!”
Adanma whimpers- “My Husband....”
Mama comes running...

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Thank you for your valid summary.