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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 3: Request for the Last Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago (edited)

this is my entry @adsactly

Sandra prepared everything and left nothing to chance. When Kenny came home and saw his wine on the table, he put all his guads up expecting her usual tricks. But he failed to expect she would play the victim and sound like she was going to suicide. So he aproached her to confort her. and when he smelled Lynda's perfume on her. He moved away, excused and went out.

His feet led him to the park where all the "what if" questions enjoyed messing with his mind. Hurt, alone and confused, Sandra was alone at home with lynda. her thoughts led her to one plan: kill Her.

She remembered the perfect way to make it natural. In that exact moment, the last what if question came to Kenny's mind: what if she was really going to suicide?

Sandra started pushing a pillow on Lynda's face. Lynda's every muscle was hysterically moving including her legs, for the firs time in months. but that doesn't matter if she's going to die. Before she gave up trying, Kenny came and saved her.

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Thank you for your valid summary.