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RE: My Life

in #poetry7 years ago

This is a fine x-ray of an interwoven external beauty and internal turmoil harmoniously brought to a peaceful resolution in the climactic last words:

Whatever I give,
I still receive.

What a beauteous poem. Good job. Good job.

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This comment is just one of a kind.
Your use of words is absolutely stupendous.

Thank you!