Waveform... a freeverse to drift off to sleep...
Waveform
From caress of hills,
To the kiss of the valleys,
Rise and fall with me.
The echoes will sing,
Rising to your frequency,
Reverberation.
I cannot lose this,
The dance you play in my ear,
Sing me to my sleep.
©2017 Steve Deltanis All rights reserved
A free verse to drift off to sleep...
Make sure to catch up on all the poems I've released thus far!
https://steemit.com/@sixshot
Beautiful, a lullabye! I love that the hills "caress" and the valleys "kiss". And "the dance you play in my ear" makes me think of a little brightly glowing fairy creature dancing and making music with its movements, right by a sleeper's ear, its melody bleeding into dreams. The merging of landscape and body is really cool in this poem, hard to tell where one ends and the other begins. Following :)
Humbly appreciated good sir! Thank you for the glorious feedback=)
Looking forward to reading more of your work @sixshot! Check out (and contribute to, if you wish) the collaborative poem I started, just for fun and to build community in the poetry section of Steemit: https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/steemit-collaborative-poetry-experiment
This is just a fun experiment, and it's already getting pretty silly, but I would be honored if you felt inspired to contribute a couple of lines :)
Also, If you have time to take a look at some of my work, I'd love to hear what you think:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/capitulation-a-poem-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/honesty-a-poem-by-bennettitalia
I'd be honored, I shall indulge when I can!