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RE: Sanguine stream

in #poetry7 years ago

I like this one a lot @d-pend

As if the plasma
Spoke its magmatic keynote
Into the gently warming air

What makes life but a breath. Without this breath and the blood flowing in us we are dust and stone. Life and the lifeless intertwined in lines of prose.

(Body above bodies, phasing upwards
To trace gyroscopic soulstrokes
On the celeste sky)

Our life given for this moment is really not in our hands but a gift to cherish and hold.

Like I said before if life on Steemit was just reading your poems and making a comment then I would be satisfied.

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Wow. I'm so grateful for your readership and the inspiration you provide on your blog, as well. Love the groovy school project. I know the feeling you mean when you express how cool it is that you get paid to go to school. Some of my most cherished memories are with the (unfortunately somewhat rare) loving and passionate teachers I've been lucky enough to have throughout my youth.

I've let myself get too cooped up in the winter, so I'll probably be going into nature a lot again now that it's warming up a bit. It provides amazing inspiration and healing. Have a great day @mineopoly!

Thank you @d-pend for the work you do and the love you share with all of us. Thank you for the words here that I take to heart. I remember those rare teachers and I am inspired to give kids the little encouragement and praise they need. It is similar to reading your poem. The influence spreads to my writing and gives me new ideas and challenges interacting within the Steemit community.

Thank you for your support for Groovy School. It is so corny but its working as a medium between my actual life as a teacher and my life documented in Steemit.

Somebody asked about for a post on dyslexia and dyscalculia so Tuesday Creativity day is about how to think outside the box.

You already have the answer. Step outside and get some fresh air and take a picture. Thanks for the reminding me.^^