Steemit Opemmic Week 46: "Wonderful Wicked Woman" Original Song by the Steemusician🎵

in #openmic7 years ago

“Life is too short, so love the one you got.”

– Bradley Nowell


Welcome Back to The @steemusician on Steemit! 🎵

An emerging artist around the block making his debut on the Steemit Blockchain.

Check out his Original Song for the Steemit Open Mic! 💃

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Title: Wonderful wicked woman

Artist: The Steemusician

I met the devil last night
She seduced me so tight
Devil was a woman
Writing this hopeless roman

Obstacle reason she brought
Deep inside downtown hell
Naïve minds love it somehow
Trapped by her magnetic spell

This woman and a magic way
Convinced every living eye
That happiness doesn’t exist today
Maybe in a little dime

I met the devil last night
We didn’t have a good time
She could’ve been just a little more kind
Her prime says it’s a crime

Characters never realized
The lights in the kitchen weren’t too bright
The cavern chinks aren’t too wide
And then everybody died

She only came to play with me
Turned everything into fire
That crazy wicked woman
Created the will for power


"Stay tuned for more tunes...

Glad to be a part of this vibrant community on Steemit!

& Thank you for your support!"

@steemusician 🎵


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You have a very cool style of composing great songs. This is I agree with @passion-ground very Doors king of music. Great job.

Cheers !!!

Right on brotha. Much appreciate. Break on through 🎵

I like the way you use 7th chords, makes the accompaniment interesting (instead of doing the same 4 chords that are used in 95% of today songs) I think the choice of all the musical elements fit perfectly with the lyrics and the theme. Good job :)

@catherinegairard Thanks for the love Cath!
It means a lot :-)

reSteemed

Thanks for the support @digitalplayer! 🎵

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My pleasure as always @luzcypher 🎵

Listening to this now for the third or fourth time... Each time is better and better.... definitely reminiscent of "the Doors!" love it!

Thanks for the love brotha @passion-ground !! Glad you're feelin the vibes. Cheers!!! 🎵

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Yo man, can your waist get any smaller within this "steemit realm" of existence?

"he-he"

Aside from the aforementioned banter of non-necessity, your entry/contribution for this week is frikkin' Stupendous! ...

and then "everybody dies".... aint't that the truth...

Be that as it may, there is simply no escaping such harsh realities.... besides of course, listening to your sublime rendition of the inevitable!

It just makes it that much more bearable... Thank You for that!