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Haha, Tod, thanks for the feedback.

I'm curious as to why you would describe it as clickbait? How would you improve it?

This is my first post on the platform, mostly to get something out there and stop feeling intimidated so I didn't go into as much depth as I would usually have, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on how I can improve my writing in the future :)

good first post, nice work :D