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RE: Retirement and Depression: 6 Ways to Overcome

in #life7 years ago

@faithful5425, you have put in definitely some efforts in this write-up which is of course commenable, however, I would like to point out some things:

  1. Maybe you should take a look at your numbering - I only see No. 1 all through (although you said 6 ways to .......). Could this be the style you chose? or just an oversight :D
  2. Maybe you should add some nice pictures in between the texts. Pictures really make reading fun, as they help to better illustrate what is been described.
    Overall, I hope people catch the gist!!!