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RE: Too Bind To See But Easy To Judge

in Steem Venezuela7 days ago (edited)

Task 1 of Lesson 1 is very simple all you had to is to describe the pictures and next you describe what you feel. So a text, story or.. is not asked.

Why we describe? To reset the way of thinking. Have a look at the first entry of @joslud he explains very well what to do and how we reset our way of thinking.

The hashtags used are not like mentioned in task 1.

Please, have a look. The deadline for task 1 also passed. You can do task 2 and 3 and step in on Monday with lesson 1.

The report you can find in the comment section.


I read your title and it comes with expectations. Next I read

Happy weekend steemians
. The weekend is finally here and I have alot of role to play this weekend, I will be very busy this weekend just the way I was busy during the week but glad I always had time to rest. Yes am here to write, this is part of me, this always reminds me of my part and am trying to create a come back but the more we grow the more responsibilities we get in life. Is a beautiful contest, which aims to strike engagement in this platform and I believe all will be well.

This piece of text is not interesting or inviting. At the time I read your text, I forgot about the title. Write this kind of text underneath your content or story.

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Oh I thought all the tasks will be ending tomorrow.

Oh just description, hmm I thought it should be something wider but anyway is ok.

As for my first state I will have to change it, i didn't really pay much attention to it because I wrote it before editing the image. Corrections will be made now.

This is meant for everyone so we start with the basics but this is also a great "trick' if you suffer from a writer's block. You take a picture and describe what you see in detail without making assumptions... next you try to mention the feelings.

By the time you did that (also describe little details for example if you have an old photo you can say it is torn) a story, poem or certain thought might be shown. If not simply start writing about whatever you think of. In many cases it's good except for the start which you can delete.

Alright 👍
I will just have to correct the intro