@blueteddy, I really enjoy your writing. I think you have huge potential. Keep polishing your craft!

Some of your scene development and phrasing are truly sublime:

She searched its golden eyes for any hint of the fear she would have felt if confined in such a way, but all she found in the dragon's eyes were seas of rage. Smoke seeped through the cracks of the dragons restrained jaws and the air around Trel began to heat. Her heart rate accelerated. Every instinct she possessed begged her to run. She shouldn’t have been there.

Well done. Keep writing.